Flaxor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[MINIT-ures]

We have all unanimously agreed that you are the winner, the question is: When will you aproach the creators about producing these so we may purchase them all!?!?!?!

jagondudo responds:

i'm a big fan of those gashapon capsule toys. I'd defo wanna see a minit theme'd series!

[An Hour A Minit]

Fantastic idea represented as clear as glass!
I feel the grass takes up a little too much of the screen as far as the composition goes. My eyes do tend to hover around there, and the sky could be darker to help bring the characters out some more. Eitherway, I still really like this piece, best of luck and well done!

JustRigo responds:

Thank you and I totally agree with your critiques. I will keep this in mind for next time.

[Minit]

Great job, I especially like how effective the shading is on appeal and depth.
Thewatering can is letting it down compared to the quality of the otherr elements in the picture. Both the head and sword are convincing enough in having solid 3D shapes, but the watering can feels like it´s made out of melted plasterline. I´d recomend using more geometric shapes instead of drawing it freehand and then bring it down abit from the handle to give a more instantely readable sillouette. I´d flip the can so that the water doesn´t confict with the characters foot and also create a more appealing sillouette for the main character pose in general. You could use one simple curved line inside to represent the abstract shape of the water which I think would fit more with the style and as well use bigger water droplets as the size they are makes the character look like a giant. The font is ace. Keep it up man!

[Sonic]

Wonderful Sonic pixel animation, it is so full of appeal!

gatekid3 responds:

Thank you

[secend]

Well executed and such a great game concept built upon the minit gameplay. I like the even more old school graphic style too!

StuffedWombat responds:

will soon release as a real game :)